DS-746: Additional copy changes

Author: ericbakenhus

src/pages/citizenship.js

@@ -36,33 +36,36 @@ const ForeignSourceReporting = ({ data }) => {
         </Heading>
         <p>
           The federal government requires institutions of higher education, such
-          as Stanford, to report gifts from a donor who is not a U.S. citizen
-          when that donor makes gifts and other payments to Stanford with an
-          aggregate value of $250,000 or more in a calendar year. Stanford must
-          also report gifts and other payments received from a donor who has
-          citizenship in one of certain specific countries (the list may change
-          over time, and currently includes China (not including Hong Kong),
-          Russia, Iran, and North Korea), when that donor makes gifts and other
-          payments to Stanford having an aggregate value of $50,000 or more
-          during a reporting period that runs from July 1 to June 30 of the
-          following year. Your generous gift(s) meet one or both of these
-          reporting thresholds. Thank you for providing your information below.
+          as Stanford, to report gifts and other payments from a donor who is
+          not a U.S. citizen when that donor makes gifts and other payments to
+          Stanford with an aggregate value of $250,000 or more in a calendar
+          year. Stanford must also report gifts and other payments received from
+          a donor who is associated with one of certain specific countries (the
+          list, which may change over time, currently includes China (while
+          excluding Hong Kong), Russia, Iran, and North Korea), when that donor
+          makes gifts and other payments to Stanford having an aggregate value
+          of $50,000 or more during a reporting period that runs from July 1 to
+          June 30 of the following year. Because your generous gift(s) meet one
+          or both of these reporting thresholds, we ask that you please provide
+          the information requested below. Thank you.
         </p>
         <p>
           You can find additional details about this policy in section V of
-          Stanford’s Gift Policy website:{' '}
+          Stanford’s{' '}
           <SbLink
             linkType="url"
             link={{
               url: 'https://giving.stanford.edu/gift-policy',
             }}
           >
-            https://giving.stanford.edu/gift-policy
+            Gift Policy website
           </SbLink>
+          .
         </p>
       </CenteredContainer>
       <div>
         <iframe
+          title="Citizenship form for foreign source reporting"
           className="airtable-embed"
           src={`https://airtable.com/embed/appssF3RJFHENkFV5/pagMeYcyTjtVgfsl4/form`}
           frameBorder="0"